B-Players (part 1)

Posted in TV Animation on July 25, 2012 by Jymn Magon

Many die-hard fans already know that there was once a show in development at Disney TV Animation called “B-Players.”  I’ve often mentioned it as the precursor to “Tale Spin,” since the demise of former led to the latter.  Baloo was the star of B-Players, and after the development was killed, Baloo made the transition to Tale Spin with great ease.  (He’s a great character, ain’t he?)  But that’s about as much as I’ve ever revealed.  Actually, the development of B-Players was a fast and furious endeavor, because in order for TV Animation to jump onto its next 65-episode series (and keep everyone at the studio employed), we needed to sell B-Players at a big corporate meeting in Florida in early Oct’88.

Good enough for a team logo!

So I’m going to devote several blogs to the lost history of “B-Players.”   I think you’ll find it interesting to watch the creative process, as well as observe how this series fit into the history of TV Animation.  OK, some backstory…  By Summer 1988 TV Animation had created numerous hits in its brief 4-year history:  “Gummi Bears,” “Duck Tales,” “Rescue Rangers,” “Winnie the Pooh,” etc.  We were falling into a pattern in which showrunners were on a revolving track.  When production on a series ended, the creative team would swing into Development Mode, coming up with the next series to be produced.  That’s where I found myself in August of ’88… looking for the next 65-episode syndicated hit.  And there’s where B-Players begins.

OK, this is later time… a Tale Spin time. But it’s still Len and me, so cut me some slack.

Len Uhley and I were the first two show developers of B-Players.  (Len joined the Disney team when I hired him as a staff writer on Gummi Bears, and he worked for years at TVA as a power hitter on almost every series.)  Obviously we had done some preliminary thinking on this series, but the earliest development I can find is the first draft of potential characters, typed up by Len on August 16, 1988.  I include it here with delight.  I love that Jose Carioca shows up as a “Fernando Lamas” character — decades before the suave Puss (Antonio Banderas) of Shrek fame.  (OK, OK, Carioca is Brazilian, I know, I know.)  Also, the platypus is now labeled as Waldo Z. which was pet name that Mark Zaslove and I used.  [It comes from a 60's episode of Steve Allen's afternoon talk show where Steve took comment cards from the audience.  One guy wrote, "My dog's name is Waldo Zibaldo."  When Steve queried the audience member why he named his dog in such a bizarre manner, the guy shrugged and said, "Cuz my name is Fred Zibaldo."  Years later I brought that name to Disney, and Waldo Zibaldobecame an all-purpose moniker… which Mark and I still use to this day, in fact.]  But most importantly, Len named the evil character “Roderick Rat.”  Interestingly, that rat character would eventually evolve from villain to main character –Ricky Rat.

This document was followed up with a Story Walk (see my blog on that – http://finetooning.wordpress.com/2010/05/31/the-story-walk/) in which Len and I batted around ideas.  I was fortunate to being working with Len on this, because: a) he’s a great gag man, and b) he takes meticulous notes.  In fact, out of the dozens of story walks I’d taken in my career, this was the first one that was ever tape recorded (by Len) which was then transcribed (by Len) for posterity.  I’m not going to lay out the entire transcription, but I will fill you in the thought process.  First of all, the two main characters of “B-Players” — Baloo and Ricky Rat — are nowhere to be found yet.  In fact at this point the series is being called “Disney’s Bit Players.”

Seriously funny.

In A Nutshell:  The series revolves around gung-ho cartoon character (a la Roger Rabbit) who is trying to inspire his fellow toons to lobby for more jobs, more screen time.  He is very plucky but a bit naive – like Rocky the Flying Squirrel or the early Mickey Mouse.   A cheerleader, hoping to inspire his fellow bit player toons to greatness — to quit their hiding on the back lot and get working again — to make great cartoons once more with their incompetent director.

Wait, what incompetent director???  Well, at this point we were discussing J. Audubon Woodlore as the nice-but-fumbling comedy director.  He likes the Bit Players…. but his Assistant Director is the villain of the piece!   An angry, conniving AD (a la Black Adder) who despises working on comedies with these has-beens.  [This is a dynamic that was never played out in Gummi Bears - in which Duke Igthorn has to play second-banana to an more powerful (yet stupid) villain named Lord Zared.  Very frustrating to Iggy.  And again, a very similar situation to Black Adder.]  At this stage of the talks the main character (who we were calling Roger for shorthand) and his cronies are all good guys, but it’s this evil AD that is the guy trying to trip them up – a spiteful, petty, turd.  You see, the AD signed an 86 picture deal with Disney, but they won’t let him direct (because he’s not a real human… like Goofy…. a human body but a dog or fox head).  So the AD has to suffer through all these horrible 2-reeler cartoons under Woodlore’s directorship.  Grrrrrrr.   THAT’S why the Black Adder character hates our toon characters.

So our lead character “Roger” is this talented, caring dude who looks out for his fellow toons.  Like when a stupid toon gets his head stuck in a bucket of cement, the Black Adder character wants the lummox fired!  But it’s Roger who convinces Audubon to “shoot around him” until the cement dissolves.  Or better still, “Roger” dresses up and fills in for the missing actor so he’s not fired.  His role model is Mickey (who he hopes to co-star with some day), but he’s not as talented as the Mouse.  So he’ll stoop to any level to get a laugh.  “Can’t juggle and unicycle at the same time?  Then I’ll smash a plate over my head!”  He wants stardom reeeeeeally bad.

Yeah, baby.

Len and I spoke about other characters on the walk, as well.  Len brought up the “strong female character” question.  [It's interesting to note that Len had a doe character in mind - named Fawn Deer (which was later used in He's Bonkers!).]   We also discussed using “Mel the Wonder Wombat (don’t ask) and a platypus character (pre-dating Phineas and Ferb by two decades).  Even a chameleon comedian who doesn’t know what style of comedy he should pursue, so he steals from everyone.  There was also a Studio Head who (as Gary Krisel suggested) should be like Alan Brady on the Dick Van Dyke Show, and he’s never seen.  But Gary was also enamored with the Baby Herman character from Roger Rabbit, so Len and I were in a quandary over which approach worked.  (But, frankly, at this point the Studio Head character didn’t matter that much.)

A bear and a rat! (artist unknown)

OK, the villain seemed to be pretty clear cut, so we wrestled with what type of character the lead was going to be.  Roger and Bugs had the rabbit thing sewn up.  “We can’t do a mouse,” said Len, who then suggested a dog.  Dogs are better than cats (as cartoon heroes), but bears “give me a heavy feeling.”  [Again, it's fascinating to note that in this story walk we turned down a rodent and a bear… who would BOTH eventually become the leads of B-Players!!!]  At one point Len referred to this dog character as Peter Pointer.

The story walk ended here, but the wheels kept turning.  On Aug 18th Len typed up a second draft of the “Cast of Characters,” and you can see the influence of the Story Walk.

We took the list of characters to designer Wendell Washer (http://www.wendellwasher.com/) who quickly drew up a bunch of supplementary toon characters.  A few days later, he turned in 9 pages of stuff.

OK, that’s all for today.  Stay tooned for the next installment of “The Lost History of B-Players.”

Higher For Hire artwork (Tale Spin)

Posted in TV Animation with tags on July 19, 2012 by Jymn Magon

While cleaning out my storage shed (where I recently discovered the Lost Ark of the Covenant), I came across a lot of Disney TV Animation papers.  There’s a lot of minutiae, but that’s what fans often thrive on.  So I’ll include all the silly bits and variations.

Storage Wars’ wet dream.

Anyway, here are designs for the interior of Higher for Hire from TALE SPIN.  They are labeled Show 31 (Save the Tiger), but that doesn’t seem right to me.  They look like they’re from the pilot mini-series, Plunder and Lightning, since they show the before and after of Rebecca’s ownership.  The approval stamp is faint, but it looks like the date is March 06 1990.  The initial is “L”… for Larry Latham???

The first is a “rendered” or shaded b/w version of Higher for Hire in its original messy state.

Baloo’s messy office looks eerily similar to MY office!!

And here is Layer #2 of that same scene.

Layer #3 (of debris)

Now here is the same illustration un-rendered.

And finally the “After Rebecca” version (without overlay).  Suitable for Rebecca’s child to play in.

Here it is with the overlay.  [Note:  I would imagine all the artwork was by the same artist, but it’s only the last two drawing that contain a name:  ”Kelly Day” (who I later worked with on Goof Troop).

Random Thoughts #2

Posted in Uncategorized on May 24, 2012 by Jymn Magon

Responding. Keeping in touch. Everyone in the loop. Yeah, that’s today’s topic.

The life of a writer (especially a freelance writer) is a lonely one. We sweat over our ideas, worry about our wordsmithing, and pray that we’re in the ballpark. After gnawing over a project for days, we finally send it out into the Void (via email), hoping that we have done a competent, pleasing job. And what’s the upshot? Nothing. Not even a “Script received. Thanks.”

I have gone days waiting for a response. And let me tell you that in my experience the phrase “No new is good news” is bogus. I’ve been on The Inside… I’ve lived the corporate life. And when a company takes a long time to get back to you, it usually mean they’re having meetings – and meetings are bad. Everyone, including the receptionist, is being asked what they think of your writing effort. And the more people involved, the more chances to say “No.”

Now to be fair, most of the time your script is going to one person – the story editor. And story editing

is a mind-stripping task. The SE is yanked every which way and told to “re-work this from the ground up but don’t miss your deadline.” So if a story editor doesn’t get back to you, there’s probably a good reason. They’ve stolen 4 hours out of their day to selfishly sleep.

But other times there is no story editor. So you are writing for producers. And producers usually meet with schedulers, accountants, art directors, sales teams, and other in-house lifeforms. With every person added, the process multiplies. So getting a quick response is nigh impossible.

So with all this said, my message to people on The Inside is this: “Please keep your writers in the loop.” When a piece of writing comes in, send an acknowledgement of receipt. (“Got your treatment. Thanks. Notes by end of week hopefully.”) If a week goes by with no news, send an update. (“Plague of frogs has slowed down the wheels of industry. No news yet.”) If another week goes by, be honest. (“The CEO hates you, and he hates your ass face.”)

“…and your mother dresses you funny!”

Nuff sed.

Random Thoughts #1

Posted in Writing on May 22, 2012 by Jymn Magon

I have a friend from Australia coming to visit next month, and that always puts me in a “fresh eyes” state of mind.  What will he think of Southern Califunny?  Will my everyday sights and sounds seem delightful or bizarre to him?  I go through the same thing when I’m visiting a new place.  I try to soak in as much as I can, cuz (as a writer) I feel like the joy (not the devil) is in the details.  So when I was out walking this morning, these are some questions I came up with while looking at my neighborhood with “fresh eyes.”

Do these houses for sale reflect a normal market or are they a sign of the hard economic times?  What is the make-up of the concrete here that makes the sidewalk sparkle at times?  Is that plant native to California?  Are ANY of them?  What does “Got Sand?” mean?…  Is that bumper sticker a national saying or only a local in-joke?  Where are the clouds?  Do Americans like ceramic lawn animals or just this nut job?  Who delivers these newspapers… kids on bikes?  Why are all the gardeners dark-skinned?  Why is nobody else walking in the heat but me?  How many people own dogs – and do they ALL bark at strangers?

I just watched HBO’s “Hemingway and Gellhorn” bio-pic, and I thought it was interesting that Martha Gellhorn made her fame as a war correspondent NOT through writing about troop movements and military strategy, but rather about how war affected the locals.  There’s a scene where Gellhorn (Nicole Kidman) looks at a photo of some fleeing citizens and she remarks on a child’s coat.  ”Look, her mother put the child’s best coat on her.  Even in the midst of shelling, she wanted the child to look good.  But in her haste, she buttoned it wrong.”  A whole human interest story in one captured war moment.  Again, it’s those details you need to catch as a writer. Image

Howard Lowery Gallery

Posted in Merchandise on February 20, 2012 by Jymn Magon
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[Photo borrowed (i.e. "stolen") from Paula Sigman Lowery's facebook page

Back in the 90′s (if you couldn’t fly your sorry butt to Christie’s or Sotheby’s art auctions in Europe) a rare and wonderful animation treat was Howard Lowery Gallery in Burbank.  This was a hop, step and jump from the Disney Studio, and the gallery was always full of fun stuff.  Howard had original comic art and cel animation and Disneyland posters and figurines and collectibles and books and… well, you get the picture.  (There was even a professional framer on the premises.)  It was an ever-changing treasure trove just tailored to toon geeks like me.  At any given time you’d run into collectors, artists, film buffs, or Disney animators in there!  Not only was Howard extremely knowledgeable about collectibles, but he also married a Disney archivist (my good friend) Paula Sigman.  Between them, they had the Disney thang covered.

The place was really hoppin’ when an auction came along, because there were tons of artwork on display.  But Howard threw some book signings and special events, as well.  One of these was the “Fantasia Fanfare” which Paula remembers as “probably 1993.”  It was the introduction of the FANTASIA Classics Collection set of figures.  Here’s Howard at the display case.

Another angle on the display case – this time with Paula.

One of the guests there was old friend and Disney artist-ambassador, Stacia Martin.

Always let you pencil be your guide.

Another guest was Disney TV Animation writer turned book author, Bruce Talkington – signing his work.

"I do NOT look like Professor Nimnul!.... OK, I do."

Philo Barnhart and Ron Dias

And finally some Disney artists.  (Paula, help me out here.   Ron? & Phillip?)

[Photos taken by Jymn Magon, er, me.]

Backlot Luncheon

Posted in Uncategorized on February 9, 2012 by Jymn Magon

I originally wrote this blog on September 18, 2008 on a completely different site – and I thought I had transfered it to wordpress… but I guess not.  So here it is (again?).

DISNEYLAND RECORDS PICNIC

I realize it would take way too much organization to lay all this stuff out properly and logically, so I’m just gonna throw stuff into the blog as I get it.   Today I’m sharing some photos and memories about another National Sales Meeting of the Walt Disney Music Co.  As I mentioned last time, we had a big hit with Mickey Mouse Disco.  Even though our WDW trip was in 1983, MMD was actually released back in 1979.  It sold great.  In fact it was the Best Selling Children’s Album two years running… even though NARM (National Association of Recording Merchandisers) never gave us the award for that honor.  (How do they vote on sales figures??? That’s like voting on the height of the tallest mountain.)

CELEBRATING THREE ALBUMS

Anyway, we didn’t rest on our laurels.  In 1980 we released three terrific albums for kids.  Namely, “Goin’ Quackers,” “Pardners,” and “Yankee Doodle Mickey.”  I’m assuming that the picnic was in 1980 to coincide with the albums’ release.  Naturally, the theme was Western to go along with the “Pardners” album.

The picnic was on the Disney Studios backlot.   In fact we were set up in the backyards of two famous Disney houses.  One was the Victorian House from “The Shaggy Dog” (among countless other shows), and the other was the house from “That Darn Cat.”  It was a barbecue set-up, and all the Music Company employees attended. Afterward, we had some live entertainment.  Willio & Phillio (the backbone of “Goin’ Quackers”) sang a few songs.  In the photo above you can see the Sales Team joining in with kazoos.  (“I’m goin’ quackers <QUACK, QUACK, QUACK> and you can come along!”)  In the semi-circle are (l to r) Sandy Beach, unknown, Eddy Medora (probably), Gary Krisel, Ron Roberg, Bill Rudolph, & Bob Pavlacka.  Also in the crowd are Willio and Phillio (in hats), Vera Wolski (in red), and, yes, that nose on the left side of the photo is me.

Here’s a better picture of the Sales Team.  (l to r)  Ron Roberg, Gary Krisel, Bob Pavlacka, Sandy Beach, ????, Bill Rudolph, and ????.  That’s me and Eddy Medora in front.  The cowboy hats were a gift to all of us from the Mouse.  (Well, the Music Company coffers, actually.)

Here’s a table of merrymakers:  That’s Miriam Aardahl, Phil “Phillio” Baron, Will “Willio” Ryan, Kit Grove, and me.

Anyway, a good time was had by all.

Ah, here are the other two covers to those three albums.

As always, if anyone can fill in the blanks (by identifying people in the photos or whatever), please contact me!

Jymnmnmnmn

CAR-A-MEL

Posted in Writing on February 8, 2012 by Jymn Magon

Holy crap, people – can we knock off this nonsense, once and for all?!!!!

This is Carmel…..

This is caramel…

Carmel…

Caramel…

It’s three flippin’ syllables.  If you keep forgetting the “a” in the middle, just remember the candy bar.  Car-a-mel-lo.

Now get it right.

(Luv ya.)

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